I don't have some old letters preserved in  the  corners of room to read  and revive
the memories of time spent with her , nor i have  her pics  but  one  sketch made 
on a piece of tissue in a coffe shop .The blotted ink on that piece of paper reminds me 
it was raining that day and she was in her best of moods , playing with her green hair 
clip,clutching it into my arm and laughing  everytime i complained it hurts .
 On nights like this when its raining outside,when i gaze out of the window 
and a gentle breeze gushes in my room ,when i call her number but i  get no reply  
there's this feeling that i can't explain .Only three simple words “I miss her”
i miss her more  than ever.Everytime you miss someone,there's this feeling  
that makes you do things that you start missing them even more.I read all  
conversations we ever text to each other,and its an amazing feeling going back 
in time,peeling off the layers and looking at the seed of love buried deep down 
in your heart,and sometime piled under the numerous messages in your cellphone.
Feeling the same excitement you felt when you text her the first time and keep 
looking at your cellphone for the next few hrs,waiting for that beep .. 
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i am speechless,,,
ReplyDeleteSuch terse n accurate description of the emotions…exact wrds used at t right place to give t right impact...superb!
loved the piece..!
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- "Everytime you miss someone,there's this feeling
that makes you do things that you start missing them even more"
- and, the ending.. I vividly remember the plethora of emotions i went thru after that message.
Any reader can immediately connect with what you have stated here :) Great going!
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